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For a lot of your code, you should remove the extra lines, and you could put them on one line. You can also return what's inside the if statement if that is the only thing that function is doing:
const verifyPassword = (user, password) => {
// check to see if the provided password matches the password property on the user object
// return true if they match
// otherwise return false
if (user.password === password) return true;
return false;
to
const verifyPassword = (user, password) => user.password === password;
| // return num after multiplying it by ten | ||
| // code here | ||
| num *= 10; | ||
| return num; |
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Here, you could write something like
const multiplyByTen = num => num * 10 with an implicit return.
| // return true if the two strings have the same length | ||
| // otherwise return false | ||
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| if (str1.length === str2.length) { |
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You could just return what's inside the if statement, in the format
const areSameLength = (str1, str2) => str1.length === str2.length;
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Same as previous, return what's inside the if statement.
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| if (num < 90) { |
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Same as previous, return what's inside the if statement.
| // return true if x and y are the same | ||
| // otherwise return false | ||
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Be careful about adding extra lines. Spacing and layout is pretty important. Your senior devs at a future job will be super strict about this stuff.
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Ternary operator could be useful here. Also, on line 6, you could be checking for x >= y to remove a few lines of code. If that if statement doesn't pass, you know to return y.
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| const greeting = (language) => { |
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If your base case matches one of your cases, you can just drop the else if (language === 'English').
I'd also suggest using switch cases to reduce code size.
Lookup table would be fastest.
https://jsperf.com/if-switch-lookup-table/10
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| const isInteger = (num) => { |
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Here I'd suggest besides putting all the code on one line, I'd also suggest returning num === Math.floor(num) over modulo.
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| const averageTestScore = (testScores) => { |
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Good work. You could use reduce here.
| const catObject = { | ||
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| age, | ||
| meow: () => { |
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Great, you could also write it as meow: () => 'Meow!'
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